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Why Not If Just – Notthedane56



If I only let you
love me like
you want to

If I only forget how
I would do, if I could
If you would only
just see

Why don’t I let you
just choose what, how, why
your way is better than

When you chose to
when we decided to
if only, I didn’t see walls
when you saw doors

Your way of loving
my way, not compatible with
my way of thinking,

Who has said
that love will find a way?
who can understand what
that means?

Your way, my way
if only, I could go back
start over, a fresh outlook
about us,
if only, I
strike that
if only we, could, would
if we really wanted to be

Why not if just
we could find that way

if just….



This piece is the work of Notthedane56. You can find a lot more of his poetry, fiction and humor on his main site Everything in and around Denmark and on his new blog My House at the Sea



4 thoughts on “Why Not If Just – Notthedane56

    1. I agree… Notthedane’s words are very heartfelt 🙂 I’m glad you enjoy his work… Don’t hesitate to visit his main site “Everything in and around Denmark” if you’d like to read some more…

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