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Her Immunity – Notthedane56


Her immunity
her resistance to what
I’d done,
lacking strength
lacking focus

Any amount
of vitamin C, injections
of common sense,
drawing her attention away
breaking the bonds between

Whatever it took
what she needed, anything
to help
a good cry on the shoulder
a close friend listening
burning my love letters

ashes to ashes

My love has left me
bound for other shores
our love gone bad,
what we dreamed, what I thought
would keep us together

gone away
gone away,

Her immunity
her true resolve
breaking all bonds, the cords
that wound around us,
keeping us close, too close
to touch,

dust to dust…




This piece is the work of Notthedane56. You can find a lot more of his poetry, fiction and humor on his main siteΒ Everything in and around DenmarkΒ and on his new blogΒ My House at the Sea



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