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The pretty girls…



Always got picked

last, at the school dances

and in gym class…

I didn’t care

much, if things

were as such…

Until you waltzed

in my life, sweet talker,

bright smile.

It hurt so bad that

you’d not be mine, I didn’t

even dared to stay in line…


Long I will, for

a moment in your arms

While the pretty girls

win you one after the other with their charms…




#NovemberNotes2017 – All the Pretty Girls * Kaleo


In response to November Notes Writing Challenge by  Sarah Doughty of Heartstring EulogiesRosema from A Reading Writer and Máh from Writing is my Pensieve.❤


8 thoughts on “The pretty girls…

  1. I find this interesting. The rejection of girls, not getting the guy they want, being the last choice – sometimes I don’t understand it. I know it exist but it’s usually a case of guys experiencing what you wrote of a great deal more than girls. More times than none, it’s simply because guys are simple. See girl, like girl, get to know girl. I do like this though, your words bring clarity.


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