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Nice try – #1MinFiction



So… I’m guessing that didn’t go well?

He pulled the daisies from his ripped shirt. He had not hoped for a warm reconciliation, but this was a little over the top, even for her. He had just forgotten her birthday, after all! When Peter asked if she had served him the “talk to the wall” treatment…

I’d rather talk to a wall, Pete. At least, they don’t angrily yell back!


This is my attempt at Monday’s One-minute Fiction prompt, hosted by Lovely Curses. Last week, the inspiration was the featured picture. Feel free to join in by clicking on the link above!

10 thoughts on “Nice try – #1MinFiction

  1. So, the guy took the flowers to a girl to make up for something, it didn’t go well, and she ripped his shirt and shoved the flowers in the ripped hole.
    That’s what I got out of it.
    Very good post, micro story.

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