“Swallow”, he said,
“Swallow, my dear…”
The spark in his eyes,
holding me so near.
His trembling fingers
caressing my head,
sitting nervously on
the side of his bed.
When he seemed ready
turned his head towards the open window,
Whispering ever so softly
“Oh swallow, my dear swallow…”
He finally let go and
I thanked him with a coo,
spreading wide my wings
I flew out into the skies’ blue.
Via today’s Daily Prompt: Swallow
Oh, C
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You liked it?:P
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You’re a sly one ; ))
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just playful with words 😛
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Sure, that’s what he said
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hehehe… he couldn’t say much more 😛
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: ))
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And yes. Of course
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The word play was absolutely phenomenal
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Well thank you 🙂 I liked the kinky/sweet contrast on the same word…
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Yes. Had i not seen the topic so late i would have put my own spin on it
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Naughty, naughty … 😉
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I think I might stay away from this one.
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Why is that? Do you dislike these little birds, Brutus? 😉
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Oh ….. all right then ….
Can we discuss the birds and bees
With you down there on hands and knees?
Can we express our special love
With eagles soaring high above?
Or should we feel a sense of shame
With starlings whistling our name?
When all our feathered friends can see
Our shameless act of nudity?
The doves are cooing in the sky
The parrots call for you and I
The robin’s singing in the trees
And don’t forget the swallow. Please.
With all this silly talk of birds
You suddenly seem lost for words
That’s not the cat that’s got your tongue
Just nod if you are having fun
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LOL I love it, Brutus!! Almost NSFW… almost! And that’s where I am…
Still giggling, hoping my co-worker doesn’t ask why 😉
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Possibly lacking the carefully and cleverly crafted subtlety of the original work
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I wouldn’t say that, but then I am slightly biased 😉
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Humourous and witty post! I enjoyed it, twas cheeky!
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There’s not much kinkiness in my writing, usually, but this play of words was just too tempting! LOL I am glad you enjoyed it… Had a lot of fun tossing and turning words to lead people to the wrong impression until the very end!
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I would like to point out, at this point, that there’s not much kinkiness in my writing, either. She started it!
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*Wink wink*
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