
Staring at your sun
Love burning my trembling skin
Vivid tangerine
This Haïku was inspired by Sonofabeach96’s post for the CYW Challenge…

Staring at your sun
Love burning my trembling skin
Vivid tangerine
This Haïku was inspired by Sonofabeach96’s post for the CYW Challenge…
Hahaha! You’re welcome. 😏
This was terrific, by the way. Magnifique!
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Merci beaucoup! I had this picture on my phone for some time now… I don’t have the slightest clue why I took it in the first place, other than the bright colors. My crazy brain at its best!!
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Vous êtes les bienvenus … et je comprends parfaitement avoir un cerveau fou. 😃
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Nice – such colour evoked in such few words. Well done.
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Thank you very much 🙂 I am starting to find these Crayola-crayons-color inspired haïkus fun to write… It might become a series of some sort!
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Sounds good to me.
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Touch your withered stem
Your juice so pale and so stale
Dirty rotten apple
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Hah! Nice take on it, Brutus 🙂 xx
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Whoops …. sounds like an insult … but actually one directed inwardly. At myself.
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No worries, I didn’t interpret it as an insult either 😉
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And now, upon reflection, if directed towards myself it takes on a regrettable but not (consciously) phallic symbolism. So that I must, once again, apologise for any offence that it may have caused.
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Ok, this appology got a much needed giggle out of me! 😉 Come here, let me fill your cup, and put a log in the fireplace… I enjoyed your haïku, and took absolutely no offence in it!
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Orange you going to miss me when I am not around anymore…..
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What a nice surprise! You know I do when you wander away… I just hope you orange thinking about going just yet 😉
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Hey! I found this old post in my inbox, lol. Brilliant poem Cyranny! ❤
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