You held me
in parenthesis,
close to your
pun, just a comma
away from your
heart, though you
wouldn’t admit it.
Punctuating the most
perfect evening, you
hyphenated our lips
I saw asterisks, and
knew right away,
This was love…
Period.
You held me
in parenthesis,
close to your
pun, just a comma
away from your
heart, though you
wouldn’t admit it.
Punctuating the most
perfect evening, you
hyphenated our lips
I saw asterisks, and
knew right away,
This was love…
Period.
Ha! This is terrific! 😊
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Thank you 🙂 Had fun with that one!
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You’re welcome. 😊
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🙂
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I never knew that punctuation could be so … um … sensual. 🙂 Excellent!
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Thank you! *Blush* I am not quite sure what led me that way…. Probably just a brain bubble, but one I’m glad I had 🙂
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It was awesome! We all love those serendipitous moments when inspiration hits us like a bolt of lightening out of the blue. I just wish there was a way to summon them on demand.
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If only! I wish I could channel inspiration, because it often hits me when I can’t sit down and write. And then, when I have free time, I am left with just the main idea, thinking “Dang, that was brilliant…”
Do you know Tenacious D? Because that inspiration thing reminded me of “The Tribute”…
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Yes, I have that exact same problem. I can think of all sorts of things to write about while I’m at work. But as soon as I get home and in front of the keyboard …. nothing. And even the thoughts I had at work seem sort of uninspiring and dull when I think about them later when I have time.
I was not familiar at all with Tenacious D. Thanks for the link!
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My pleasure 🙂
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Fascinating, clever, loved it.
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Thank you 🙂 Never underestimate good punctuation… hehehehe
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You know what i think about your poems my dear..!!
Love youu!❤️❤️
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Thank you Sweety 🙂 Love you too xx
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