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What I loved…



She sat.



And sorry.


Her words,

her opinions,

her dreams

going unnoticed in the crowd.


Sighing by

the window,

she whispered

to the wind…


That’s what I loved about him… He saw me. 

5 thoughts on “What I loved…

  1. Oh…….sighing by the window. beautiful imagery! It even sounds pretty in my execllent french, don’t you think? “Son sein dans un miroir, elle s’étouffait sur le vent”

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    1. Aww thank you Suze!! I love your addition to my poem, and I think you could write your own French posts, if you really wanted to! You clearly underestimate your French abilities 😉

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