I love how you structure this: the staccato intensity of the first lines, then the slower, melancholy pace of the coda. Beautifully encapsulates the sadness and irony of the words.
Wow, I really like how you analyzed this piece 🙂 My writing is so spontaneous, I hadn’t even noticed, but I agree with your reading of it! Thank you very much, Eleanor 🙂
Cyranny's Cove 
You back at it again?
See you and you’re freaky mind reading powers
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😉 Been there, I suppose? 😛
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I love how you structure this: the staccato intensity of the first lines, then the slower, melancholy pace of the coda. Beautifully encapsulates the sadness and irony of the words.
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Wow, I really like how you analyzed this piece 🙂 My writing is so spontaneous, I hadn’t even noticed, but I agree with your reading of it! Thank you very much, Eleanor 🙂
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sounds like the voice of experience …
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Yeah, been there, done that… Takes a lot of time to recover, but was well worth the trip, back then! 😉
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there’s a reason why so may useful (English) words start with ‘f’ 😉
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