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You don’t care…




When you gave me
This empty stare
Saying you didn’t
Even care
If I lived or
If I died…
I pitied you.
An cried, to
Give you the false
That you’d won,
Just an illusion.
One last gift
For the road…
Pick up your hat
And put on your coat,
Take your hate
With you, Darling!
I’ll hold on to
The good feelings,
Until you change
Your mind,
And if you don’t
That’s fine…
Hate me wholeheartedly
If you will,
For your rancor
Will never kill.




#NovemberNotes2019 – I don’t care by Apocalyptica (ft. Adam Gontier)


In response to November Notes Writing Challenge by  Sarah Doughty of Heartstring 



10 thoughts on “You don’t care…

    1. Thank you dear Beckie 🙂 Hate only hurts the one that hates… That’s a lesson that I took a long time to learn 😉 Sarah’s November Notes Challenge is great, you should check it out! xx

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